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The Flame

O magical flame
The farther you go
The harder I burn

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2012 11:08:00 AM

I don't see how that I missed this one..This is a great passionate work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2012 7:19:00 PM

Mohammad, I am going to go see facebook now about that post you told me about. I hope you are on my friends' list; otherwise, I won't see what you are talking about. Hope you are friended!!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/3/2013 12:47:00 PM

I think you will be able to see. If not send me a friend request on the facebook to enable me to respond. Send a freind reuest any way. Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2012 1:11:00 PM

A quick visit to your nice poem,Mohammad. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/24/2012 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Anne. I reciprocate your kind wishes for Christmas. Very Merry Christmas and a very happy, creative and prosperous New Year. Love

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/14/2012 1:03:00 PM

NICE WRITE MOHAMMAD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2012 10:36:00 PM

How nice you had internet connection today, Mohammad. Happy Christmas season!!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/14/2012 10:40:00 AM

Happy Christmas season to you also Andrea. When we left Portugal Christmas shopping fervour had already started. We bought lot of chocolates, Christmas Cakes and an exotic speciality of Portugal called Bolo Rei and carried them to Karachi for my family and friends. There is a large Christian community here too who celeberate Christmas with enthusism. Top hotels serve special Christmas Dinner on the occasion. Churches are decorated with lightings and special prayers are offerred. But these are nothing compared to the celeberations in the west. So, have a nice time. Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/13/2012 11:56:00 AM

super one Mohammad xx

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/14/2012 10:15:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation Mandy. I am so glad you like my Senryu.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2012 9:25:00 AM

this is sensational,

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/13/2012 12:24:00 PM

Thanks for visiting my Haiku and for your kind appreciation. Have a nice day.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2012 7:58:00 PM

wow... Mohammad, love comes in a form we can not understand... pain, is the only one that burns... when it comes to being apart... even if it is only fr a day or week... good senryu...always~ LINDA

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/13/2012 12:53:00 PM

Hi Linda! Thanks for visiting my Senryu and for your admiration. How true is your observation about the burning caused by love when one is apart. You have reached the soul of my Senryu. Thanks.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2012 5:53:00 PM

Love the beginning and love the ending. Very good piece my friend. Michael

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/13/2012 12:14:00 PM

Thanks for visiting my Haiku and your beautiful comments, Michael. I admire your sensitivity.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2012 8:23:00 AM

wow, you say so much with these few lines. awesome one!! and like you, I too proclaim I am married. ha haha. I think some of the poems we poets come up with make people wonder about us all!!!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/1/2012 5:47:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comments. You are so right about people wondering about us poets over what we at times write - some also feel jealous. Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2012 8:11:00 AM

Lovely thought .... and beautifully written, Mohammad. - Hope your weekend is lovely. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/1/2012 5:26:00 PM

Thanks Anne for your appreciation. Your words are always encouraging. Love

The Flame

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