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The Five Senses

the things i can see: rain on the window, Christmas cards, swaying trees, a sleeping old lady, bills to pay and i can feel: the desk, a sneeze coming on, the chair and my 'tache i can hear: clocks ticking, snores, music lemon, rose smells wine! (the last one is wishful thinking, LOL)

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Date: 12/27/2024 5:59:00 AM
Jack, wonderful poem, congratulations on your win, miss you ~
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Date: 12/22/2024 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jack . Merry Christmas. love phyl
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Date: 12/17/2024 3:51:00 AM
I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. I can see the scene from your description. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 12/16/2024 8:45:00 PM
Rose.. Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!
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Date: 12/16/2024 2:12:00 PM
Lovely senses! Congrats! Fave
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Date: 12/16/2024 9:43:00 AM
- Great written ... reading with a smile ... congratulations, Jack :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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