The Five Senses

the things  i can see:
rain on the window,
Christmas cards, swaying
trees, a sleeping old
lady, bills to pay

and i can feel: 
the desk, a sneeze
coming on, the 
chair and my 'tache

i can hear:
clocks ticking,
snores, music

lemon,
rose smells

wine!

(the last one is wishful thinking, LOL)
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La France Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Jack, wonderful poem, congratulations on your win, miss you ~
Babcock Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Congrats on your win Jack . Merry Christmas. love phyl
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 3:51 AM
I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. I can see the scene from your description. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
mysore Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 8:45 PM
Rose.. Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Lovely senses! Congrats! Fave
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:43 AM
- Great written ... reading with a smile ... congratulations, Jack :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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