The Fist

Last winter it was
i clearly remember
ending of August 
beginning September

The kids were in bed 
when I heard you come in 
the stench of alcohol 
the clanging of tins

You came up the stairs 
trying to find me 
the dirt from your boots
covering the carpet 

I tried to hide in the closet 
holding my breath 
the thud of your step 
shaking the doors 

The doors rattled
becoming unhinged
the creak of the wood
making me nervous

We both know
whats about to happen 
the raise of your fist 
hitting my face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/3/2009 10:39:00 AM
thanks sara appreciated love, amy-eve
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:23:00 PM
I hope that this is a topic and not fact. If fact get a plan and get out. Nicely done I felt the fear and was ready to jump from a window. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/1/2009 5:00:00 PM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Amy. Enjoyed this read. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 2:52:00 PM
much love to you. x
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Date: 11/1/2009 5:21:00 AM
A powerful (and tragic) piece of writing...only cowards beat up women! Wecome to the Soup...looking forward to reading more - Tim
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