The Fishermen's Lament

Angrily, rain enfolds the insular rise of lawn undulating. 
Anglers dream, envious fishermen, inside looking out urging 

apostles, who elope within imaginary onslaughts, hooked unburdening's.
Aloft, thunder encounters lightening's insistent taunt, oracles fearsome uttering's.

And still, each fisherman's innermost summoning orchestrates this untoward
atmospheric downfall, each drop induced, prayerful, outpouring is underscored.

Admittedly many envious housebound inmates seek oceans, lakes, unexplored
although, the earthly torrent interferes pitiless, onerous, rainfall unleashed. 

Absent the energizing rays introduced by ordinary sun, undone 
are these enigmatic men in rooms, oar less, ship-less, landlubbers unconsoled.

Another day encases them indoors mooning over fish uncontrolled.
A trophy earned, stuffed, indisputably shows offerings untold.

Ah, fishtails energetically rise incensed by objections never unabridged 
absent their earnest wives, imagination rolls on winds un-curtailed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Onclaud Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:09 PM
abstract in tone and design, debbie.. you pulled it!.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Congrats for your win, Debs!
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Debbie
A   Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 5:08 PM
nice win...PD
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Way to go..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 7:48 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, Debbie
Harper Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Debbie, this reads like some fishing trips I've been on, cool mix of the two forms. Enjoyed it.
Dunn Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Nice write very meaningful.
Macmillan Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Looking out for ya, 4th line missing a syllable, line 6, too... gotta fly will email you... no time.. Verity's preschool gets ut in 1/2 an hr and I must walk there... love Dee
Richards Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Even something as ordinary as the life of a fisherman..........is turned into a poet's dream, only you could make extraordinary!
Zerbst Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Your descriptions and unique words add a power that this poem would otherwise not possess.
Wesley Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 3:09 PM
You use your extensive vocabulary with great effect in this Debbi, A fascinating story I enjoyed. Luv, Lizzie
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:43 AM
love this, Debs - and what a great combination of forms. congrats on your wins too : )
Ryerson Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Ah, Deb...stunning, hypnotic and oh so very sad...Modern sonnet? Tanka chaser?...You are light-years ahead of me cher!...In closing: Long-time-no-hear (was it something I said?) - Tim
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