The Fisherman's Wife

The surf pounds against cliff
I beat my pillow moaning 
you are gone, your heart of stone
not swayed by my tears

onoko*-san the bringer 
who has seeded my garden
return like the sea otter
through the waves to me

The conch shell echoes your name
you are spirit born, deck lifted
I have burnt incense for you
do not haunt my shoals  


* Three Dodoitsu's which tell the tale of LOVE meant to be sung.
onoko is the Ainu word for man comprised of 3 syllables
“o”, “no” and “ko” which refer to male and female sexual organs. 

EXAMPLE for my contest
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Scarfone Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 9:43 PM
WHOA... AWESOME--PLEASE XCUSE CAPS. LONG STORY.. I READ 9 OF YOUR WONDERFUL WORKS OF THOUGHT. YET, I CAME BK TO THIS BEAUTY. IT STILL AMAZES ME IN A WORLD OF BILLIONS X EACH INDIVIDUAL WITH A MEGA DICTIONARY OF THOUGHT AND WORDS , THAT A LONE SOLITARY INDIVIDUAL CAN PUT TOGETHER STRINGS OF BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSIVE WORDS THAT TOUCH THE SOUL. & CREATE THOUGHT THAT CHANGES EACH TIME THE WORDS ARE READ. PS: THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING ON MY WORKS ROCK SCARFONE GOLDSMITHWORKS...
Goff Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Wow! Intense spiritual work! Deb! jimbo
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 5:29 PM
No, I seriously thought it is an oldie from you.Soupmail.
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 2:03 PM
Good one! i think I have read it before?
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 6:56 AM
I like this Dodoitsu. As I recall, this form can be extended to read like a long poem. I saw many versions where they were not even divided into stanzas, but I think it doesn't matter. Great example!
Jordan Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:32 AM
God one! I don't know this form, but I will look it up. And thanks for the explanation... Jack
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 3:45 PM
You pull from so many venues of inspiration. This is very sensual and just awesome ... :)
Chircop Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Enjoyed reading your love tale dear lady..Its sad and beautiful....I do hope many will.participate in your challenging contest.
Guzzi Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 8:50 AM
LOL Sara..you know..they were NOT explicit but I bet we could guess 2 of the parts?
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Great job..What does each syllable mean in that word?...Educational..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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