The First Time

Last night was the first time
we stayed together
tenderly exploring delicate new beginnings
and I woke this morning to singing birds
but feeling frightened
and fragile
Then you opened your eyes and smiled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 5, 2015 at 9:50 PM
Carolina* I enjoyed reading this poem, Thank you for sharing. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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February 2, 2014 at 12:16 PM
Hi Carolina: I'm glad you were reassured with a smile. Good write. My compliments.
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February 2, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Hi Carolina: I'm glad you were reassured with a smile. Good write. My compliments.
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February 2, 2014 at 8:44 AM
- Lovely written, Carolina !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bugeja Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 6:37 AM
very sweet.....
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February 1, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Thank you
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