The First Poke

sitting on a staircase
stairing at my arm
"you sure you want this"
i nod my head
hold my breath
and look away
a belt above my elbow
veins untouched and clean
a poke 
"dont flinch"
a warm tingling feeling
crawls slowley up my arm
my entire body shaking
a not ties in my tummy
a feeling i dont like
"calm down your just nervious,
lay down and relax
youll fly high in a minute"
an eternity passes
a spark in my brain
a tiny feeling grows
bigger and bigger
i feel like im floating
i just cant explain it
the feeling i mean
this marks the first time
it got a hold of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bono Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:46 PM
I posted a new poem.
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December 13, 2009 at 8:36 PM
I have a new poem posted.
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December 9, 2009 at 9:16 AM
Thank you for your comment.Hope all is well.
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December 8, 2009 at 9:14 AM
This one is a little scary.Not sure about it.Hope all is well.Soup mail me.
Bono Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 6:00 PM
I posted a christmas poem
Telling Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Hmmm, i like the explicitness of it. But i agree that it would be nice to think its not true. I do like it though.
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 2:22 PM
This is a very sad write. I hope that it is not true. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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