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The First Mile Marker

As I approach the first mile marker I realize I am still glorying in the cheers and hoots of my family; the proverbial die is cast. a weird smile on my face, I have never seen so many long legs as they dart past. Some of their bottoms are so exercise- lean that they barely bounce at all. This marathon is my first race; I watch others break free. Do not look back, facing forward, smiling in a keen unnatural way. It is best if I do not know there are not others behind me. I fear it, but to verify it might make me lose my energy. I clear my mind, thinking one step at a time, I follow their trail. but what about your torn ACL an internal voice queries. I still it immediately, afraid it will cause me to fail. The first mile marker is within my sight. Another runner dashes past me, and throws me a quick grin. I am invincible, ready, willing, in shape for this. I run after them, glorying in an anticipation of a win. Written 12-20-2018 Contest: 2019 Poetry Marathon sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 12/21/2018 10:44:00 AM
Oh good one, good luck in these contests.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/21/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you M.L. It is a challenge I am ready to try to keep up with.
Date: 12/20/2018 4:51:00 PM
A winner in my book! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you. I really debated about trying this marathon thing.
Date: 12/20/2018 11:12:00 AM
Me and my trick knee like this poem Caren. Happy Holidays. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I hope that you have the best holiday ever!
Date: 12/20/2018 10:46:00 AM
Hey Caren, This is awesome, everything in life is a challenge and a right attitude, as you have in this poem makes you almost a winner - you've past the first marker, determination will get you there. A lovely read! Good luck in the contest. Hugs and wishes, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. I hesitated for a few seconds, then I thought "why not give it a go?"

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