The First Kiss By Collice Rodrigue

Standing together in a moment in which we froze

A feeling of love somewhere within our hearts arose

Standing there knowing not what we were supposed to do

I looked in your eyes and you looked in mine too

 

We couldn’t find any words left to be spoken

Only random rules which were ready to be broken

It was all so quiet, there wasn’t a single sound

The earth stopped rotating it couldn’t turn around

 

Between us there was no distance nor was there any space

So close, that your nose touched the skin of my face

I pulled you close and grabbed you by your waist

You put your arms around me giving me a loving embrace

 

As I moved closer and asked, “Can I?”

You answered my question by closing your eye.

By every passing moment more and more closer our lips approached

And in a while the forbidden territory our lips had encroached

 

-Collice Rodrigues

11/11/2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 12:57 PM
its a poem describing a couple having their first kiss without actually using the word kiss
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September 9, 2011 at 8:23 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Collice. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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September 14, 2011 at 12:54 PM
thank you carol...by the way are you the moderator for this site or sumthin?
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