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The First Greeting From Your Eyes

I shouldn't have looked into wondrous eyes to find a reason to comply and stay and dance with romance beneath stars that sigh in a fragrant-scented night, I'll obey that your eyes so tender could hold me chained with delicate passions burning desire I become a prisoner that's retrained freedom is granted to caress the fire we'll hear the breathless breath of love in flight and find a quietness that we'll embrace unaware of stars falling through the night I am lost in eyes that reflect love's grace that I have looked into your wondrous eyes to strip my mask, my unwilling disguise

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Date: 12/13/2023 7:00:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and miridical love poem with absolutely gorgeous descriptions about the beloved's eyes and aura.. True love can genuinely compel us to reveal and discover our true selves, to bring out the best in us. "fragrant-scented night", "unaware of stars falling through the night" Gorgeously written!
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