The First Fall Breeze
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Fall Splendor - 8 to 16 lines of Rhyme
Contest Judged: 9/8/2023 4:37:00 PM
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchen
2nd Place
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Did you notice the first fall breeze?
Cool and crisp it feathers your face
A premonition of winter’s freeze
But gentle like a silken lace
The leaves dropping as the colors change
And earth begins it’s dormant nap
The autumn breeze so lovely and strange
Points out the path on winter’s map
The first fall breeze gently reminds me
Of the long gone days of my youth
Refreshing as I searched for the key
I hoped would bring wisdom and truth
Refreshing as it was but knowing
The first fall breeze had made it clear
Mother Earth with splendor showing
The pure white winter drawing near
Copyright © Andy Chunn | Year Posted 2023
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