The Fire Within

With soul ablaze, faced the skies,
Out came the passionate sighs.
Emotions steadily rise,
Bestowed by smoldering eyes.
© Arabelle Sanchez-Grospe 07292014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Brown Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 9:03 AM
yes within, the fire fly's , Great work here my friend!!! Blessings, Stacey
Belle Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:14 PM
thanks, Stacey.
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 3:14 PM
Volcanic she be, whilst her inner fires burn, then, eruption! <*> Love it Arabelle, as with this form. One must try it :)
Belle Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:13 PM
you cracked it too, James. "twas supposed to be a secret. Lol! LoveLots, Ara
Glenister Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 12:39 AM
Oooo.that made my stomach contract..well said. I would have preferred thighs to sighs..but then again..I'm a bloke. :)
Belle Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Hahaha.. you cracked the poem just right.
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August 9, 2014 at 8:54 PM
oh now this is first time I ever saw jueju form listed. How interesting!! A smoldering poem!
Belle Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I asked the admin team to include this poetry. LoveLots, Ara
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