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The Fire Within

With soul ablaze, faced the skies, Out came the passionate sighs. Emotions steadily rise, Bestowed by smoldering eyes. © Arabelle Sanchez-Grospe 07292014

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Stacey Brown

Date: 8/15/2014 9:03:00 AM

yes within, the fire fly's , Great work here my friend!!! Blessings, Stacey

Ara Belle
Date: 8/19/2014 5:14:00 PM

thanks, Stacey.

James Fraser

Date: 8/14/2014 3:14:00 PM

Volcanic she be, whilst her inner fires burn, then, eruption! <*> Love it Arabelle, as with this form. One must try it :)

Ara Belle
Date: 8/19/2014 5:13:00 PM

you cracked it too, James. "twas supposed to be a secret. Lol! LoveLots, Ara

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/11/2014 12:39:00 AM

Oooo.that made my stomach contract..well said. I would have preferred thighs to sighs..but then again..I'm a bloke. :)

Ara Belle
Date: 8/19/2014 5:13:00 PM

Hahaha.. you cracked the poem just right.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2014 8:54:00 PM

oh now this is first time I ever saw jueju form listed. How interesting!! A smoldering poem!

Ara Belle
Date: 8/10/2014 8:31:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I asked the admin team to include this poetry. LoveLots, Ara