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Image result for ocean dunes moonlight

the fire rages on -

The moon is peeking o'er the blushing reach
Hung low to splash the skies with Milky Way
Each beam it softly weaves upon this beach

Finds me deep in the throes of love's decay
I never knew how hot your embers burned
Red glowing as our epic stars were crossed
Each flame igniting as our passion churned

Realizing, not, until those dreams were lost
Above me now, soar vaults of twilight blue
Glib witness to these lonely dunes that bind
Each tender moment here I spent with you
Set fresh ablaze as love and limbs entwined

Oh, never will these ghosts of you be gone
Not while the fire called "You" still rages on.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Pick A Title, Volume 8 - Acrostic" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/7/2019 9:51:00 PM
I really love this. It's a perfectly soft whisper against the page. I love it. Congratulations. Many Blessings.
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Date: 9/7/2019 8:14:00 PM
Acrostic's don't need to rhyme, but you have put in the extra time to make yours rhyme Greg. Poet's here at PS have elevated this form to a greater length and have made them rhyme. Yours is lovely Greg! Congratulations on your deserving first place! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/7/2019 2:52:00 PM
- Many beautiful lines, Gregory :) - Congratulations on your 1st place win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2019 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in my contest with this phenomenal poem, Greg!:-)
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Date: 9/5/2019 1:26:00 PM
Amazing acrostic G, has a flow that is not often seen in an acrostic, if for a contest a sure winner!
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:33:00 AM
This was fantastic, you did an amazing job with this and it should do well in the contest
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