The Final Staccato

Never did I wound the earth
As I wandered through green meadows,
On the edge of a mourning land.

Never did I steal a single grain
From the quiet grammar
Of nature’s rhyming fields.

Never did I protest the tender murmur
Of the morning air,
Brushing the skin of dawn.

Never did I fashion
even the smallest cage—
Not one a flea
Might call its own.

Never did I know where I misplaced
My better half,
Left unawares at life’s crossing paths.

Never did I summon a fellow soul
To walk beside me
Across long, lonesome roads.

And yet I passed,
Vaguely, before the facade
Of this promised land.

And now my eyes seek rest,
A closing hush,
A final staccato,
An eternal sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Buhagiar Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 8:40 AM
A wonderful poem based on a spectrum of life. Great deep thoughts throughout.
Somadas Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 1:53 AM
Thank you Victor for your visit and kind words..
George Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 4:59 AM
To have cared the earth in the best possible way without stealing anything from her is indeed a great thing when many are stripping her bare and plundering everything from her because of their insatiable greed. A great poem dear friend.
Somadas Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 1:53 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Your words deeply touch me. If the poem can remind us to care for the earth with respect and restraint, then it has truly fulfilled its purpose.
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