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The Final Sentence

The final sentence that I wrote – Ragged words I could not speak – And so the sentence for me spoke The letters written on the sheet – The words I wrote but could not speak Read my sentence back to me Like shards of glass in bas relief Spoken there for me to hear – It read my sentence word for word I dared not breathe – I could not speak – ‘Twas worse than I had ever heard The words I’d written on the sheet And though I wrote what now I heard – The sentence and the words it spoke – I could not take it at its word – I took the sentence that I wrote And dashed it on the rocks! The words, The letters, fell – the sentence broke And as it broke my spirit stirred And something pure – in me – awoke –

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Date: 3/11/2025 12:45:00 AM
Great poem John. Excellent rhyming, cadence, flow and meaning. Where are all the comments a poem such as this deserves? Cheers - Gary
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John Oldham
Date: 3/15/2025 5:23:00 AM
Thanks, Gary! Appreciate your comments. I do strive for flow in my poems, and meaning. Best -
Date: 2/23/2025 8:18:00 PM
I really really enjoy your writing. The flow keeps me word for word :)
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John Oldham
Date: 2/26/2025 5:47:00 PM
Thanks, Paige - Be well!

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