The Final Sentence

The final sentence that I wrote –
Ragged words I could not speak – 
And so the sentence for me spoke 
The letters written on the sheet –

The words I wrote but could not speak
Read my sentence back to me
Like shards of glass in bas relief
Spoken there for me to hear –

It read my sentence word for word
I dared not breathe – I could not speak –
‘Twas worse than I had ever heard
The words I’d written on the sheet

And though I wrote what now I heard
– The sentence and the words it spoke –
I could not take it at its word –
I took the sentence that I wrote

And dashed it on the rocks! The words,
The letters, fell – the sentence broke
And as it broke my spirit stirred
And something pure – in me – awoke –

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/11/2025 12:45:00 AM
Great poem John. Excellent rhyming, cadence, flow and meaning. Where are all the comments a poem such as this deserves? Cheers - Gary
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John Oldham
Date: 3/15/2025 5:23:00 AM
Thanks, Gary! Appreciate your comments. I do strive for flow in my poems, and meaning. Best -
Date: 2/23/2025 8:18:00 PM
I really really enjoy your writing. The flow keeps me word for word :)
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John Oldham
Date: 2/26/2025 5:47:00 PM
Thanks, Paige - Be well!
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