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Ebony black violent space birth in depth, exploding stars distances seem eternal worlds spin traveling in circles suns nothing but balls of gas meteors flaming large and small craters black holes gravity pulls everything in space and time, matter and energy heliocentric model from Copernicus's head galaxy, Milky Way, dark matter subatomic particles crashing atoms creating and destroying stars turn dwarf Creatures born crawl out of this mire travelers in space crossing dimensions the speed of light vehicles dream destination, virgin planet forest rivers, ocean sand crashed on the plains of an African meadow survivors in a violent realm Earth was the name of this planet they would never leave it's now their home, they are Man 1/28/18 contest Ancient Aliens

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Date: 3/3/2018 12:44:00 PM
We are the aliens. Fund read, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:39:00 AM
...the original "are we there yet!" Congrats on your placement in the contest Frederic
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Date: 1/29/2018 7:35:00 AM
Love that first line, it sets the scene for the whole poem.. A great poem and something that may actually happen.. maybe they walk amongst us already..
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Date: 1/28/2018 9:03:00 PM
I see we think alike, Frederic...we may well be the aliens we fear...strange and yet so logical and I believe God created it ALL. Just magical....
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/28/2018 10:01:00 PM
a greater power than I is the only one who truly knows, yes it is magical that we are even here...thank you Carole
Date: 1/28/2018 1:12:00 PM
Fantastic. I like this..."heliocentric model from Copernicus's head..."
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/28/2018 9:57:00 PM
this was a strange contest to enter because it was an easy one to make a cartoon out of, I tried to give it a level of seriousness, glad you liked it

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