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the final dance

theme : trees/leaves ~~~~ the final dance ~~~~ the trees bend and sway dancing to the wind's music ... ballet of nature the leaves twirl and swirl in colourful performance to land on earth's stage the leaves bid farewell as the wind entices them ... trees now stand alone for Linda Marie's Haiku hodgepodge trio contest by Francine Roberts , 24/01/2012 ( colour is the Canadian/UK spelling, color the American)

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Date: 6/21/2012 12:40:00 AM
A superb triple HAIKU! Perfect 575 rhythm with beautiful language and images. COOL! Keith :)
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Date: 5/23/2012 12:11:00 PM
A graceful way to end the season. I love this sad season you describe so well for it ends all too soon. Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 3/21/2012 8:20:00 PM
This has a very serene, scenic view, feel to it . Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:35:00 AM
Francine awesome write and well deserved win. Congrats...............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:02:00 PM
I love the dance imagery, it fits so well. Congrats on your 1st place win, Francine! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:24:00 AM
This is really nice Francine. I used that theme also for Linda-Marie's contest. Thanks for my 6th placement in your Romantic-Senryu contest.
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Franchis.....spandan
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Date: 1/30/2012 4:16:00 PM
Francine congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:47:00 PM
Big congratulations on your win, Francine. I especially ove that last line and the imagery it portrays!! thanks for your last contest and my placement. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:19:00 PM
Love the last haiku especially, each one stands beautifully on it's own! Congratulations, Francine, and thank you again for my placement in your contest!!
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice win. Jon
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:13:00 PM
congrats Francine on first place win with this magnificent entry ..thankxx for supporting ..
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Date: 1/25/2012 11:57:00 AM
What a touching description of fall, giving life to the leaves through personification. I'm no haiku expert, Francine, but this is a beautiful poem and so full of imagery. Awesome! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:29:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:28:00 AM
Wow, great Haiku Francine! As Andrea said, your last Haiku at the end, completes and ties everything together! I love it! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:08:00 PM
I just love how you brought it all together at the end. What a great set of haiku. Isn't LInda's contest inspiring?
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:54:00 PM
Francine, as always, I thoroughly enjoyed participating in your most recent contest. I look forward to your next one. This is a good haiku trio.
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful! I love the movement throughout. Reading this is like a hike on an autumn day. I feel like a spectator at one of nature's greatest performances! Blessings, Rhonda
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