The Fifth Season

Welcome to my mountain abode, you can have coffee and snacks while watching the show The scenes change each night, a new manger here and there built by the Congregation below In the Nativity Scene, down at the church I am the Wiseman with Frankincense as my Gift The town Christmas tree, at the center of town square, almost hidden by the giant snowdrift As the Tree is lit, and Carols sung , I light my donation to the town: The Christmas Star Every year the town folk would say the Peidmont “ Christmas Star “ can be seen near and far The community all together Sharing the Love and Grace of the fifth season : Christmas Inspired by Carolyn Devonshire's Contest " Christmas in Your Town "

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/16/2012 5:15:00 PM

This definably sounds like a place to stop at for much fun. Interesting style and so welcoming to the reader to read. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 8:29:00 PM

wow, this sounds like a great little town, Daniel. Where is it??? Wish I had seen all these past contest entries of people! Thanks for your sweet comments. I'd write a book if I only had a time (the opera book haha) andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2009 7:21:00 AM

Sounds like a beautiful and faith built community. Keep the magical pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/30/2009 6:06:00 PM

thanks for sharing, thanks for your comments!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/20/2009 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fasinating writing with us HG. May this weekend find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/19/2009 11:01:00 PM

Id love to be on that mountain,imagine if all the poetry soupers could meet to watch the Christmas Star together there,all together having coffee..wonderful view..sharing love and grace.. beautiful..Fifth Season..Charma