The Fiend of Time

The fiend of time is preying on the substance of my youth,
I’m smoldering away existence to avoid the awful truth
That time is not my friend and the enemy is myself,
And there’s little more to do but accept its mocking stealth.

In a blink of an eye it’s gone, like it was never there before,
All those years I’ve wasted, when I should’ve been doing more.
Planning for the future or treating each day like the last
But living in the fast lane you don’t even see it pass.

Suddenly you realise that time is slipping away,
A terrible fear is rising with every passing day
The life style that we lead is a fast track to demise
And even with this knowledge we will not compromise.

When I look at my reflection I see what is yet to come,
This pleasing image standing here is soon to be undone.
And when ten years have passed and the image comes to life,
What will I be thinking then, having gone through all that strife?

The fiend’s grip is closing in with no time for preparation,
The waiting room of life where we’re chained by anticipation
Of traumas to unfold of which we’re blissfully unaware
The fiend of time ticks on for a world that doesn’t care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/25/2009 4:37:00 AM
When we reach the top and start to go down the mountain things seem to speed up. Interesting way to approach the subject. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/2/2009 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Charlotte. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 12:52:00 PM
I really like this. I'm like it when it looks like a poem was written with ease when I know it can be anything but: especially with rhyming poems. Congratulations on placing in Michael's contest.
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Michael's contest! Truely a wonderful poem! ~*~ Trudy~*~
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Date: 7/30/2009 10:56:00 AM
Time can go by so very fast Charlotte, and then we wonder where it went, kool poem>>James
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