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The Field Of Forgiveness

The field 
of forgiveness 
accepts 
seeds of regret 

to merge 
with seeds of hurt
hoping
to bloom new starts

The pain 
of wrongs that stab
heals with 
the words "I'm sorry" 

The angst
felt by offenders
grows calm
with "you're forgiven" 

So mend
the fractured hearts
in life's
field of forgiveness

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Ink Empress Date: 12/17/2024 10:27:00 AM This is so evocative and heartfelt and i love the ending the most and also the softness of your words woven here dear sandra. Theres so much depth in what youv written. Thank you for sharing, congratulations on your win Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 12/17/2024 5:12:00 PM Thank you so much, Ink, for your visit and uplifting comments. I enjoyed writing for your contest and appreciate my placement. Sandra

Lin Lane Date: 12/6/2024 10:29:00 AM Sowing seeds of regret... that's a powerful line, Sandra. We should be able to plow those fields before getting to that point. Nicely written. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 12/17/2024 5:13:00 PM Thank you very much, Lin, for your lovely comment! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison Date: 12/6/2024 8:46:00 AM Excellent ink, I especially love the seeds of regrets line Sandra. a very uplifting thought provoking piece indeed:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 12/17/2024 5:14:00 PM Thank you, Jan! Hugs, Sandra

Yann Rolland Date: 12/6/2024 7:30:00 AM nice poem for a better world, enjoyed Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 12/17/2024 5:14:00 PM Thank you very much, Yann. Sandra