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The Ferris Wheel and Being Bipolar

Riding so long, I feel nauseous They won’t stop the Ferris wheel My throat is dry and cracked from screaming Stop!, Please Stop! Up, up - ground shifting at dizzying heights Down, down - crashing, stomach flopping White knuckles from holding the grimy bar Smell of metal and cooking meat all around Creaking and moaning of hot gears and Weight under tension Unnerving canting and swaying of A rickety car with black grease oozing from Over-worked pivot points and hinges Just another day at the carnival…. And being Bipolar.

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Date: 4/19/2012 11:47:00 AM
Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Kelly. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:47:00 PM
You really have a knack for great storytelling. I thought the last two lines were brilliant. Not only did those lines sum up the whole piece they did it with impact.
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