The Feral Hymen

virgin innocence unbroken and still intact savage untamed beast

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John Lawless

Date: 12/30/2020 12:27:00 PM

The title alone made this a must read and the senryu a masterful manipulation of the foibles of men

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/30/2020 1:13:00 PM

Thanks John, you get it exactly I was a bit concerned people might think it was mere innuendo, but couldn’t be further from the case, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/29/2020 10:28:00 AM

Waiting for a winner...a prize.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2020 10:40:00 AM

All figurative Kim, to do with unadulterated pristine nature, last 2 lines are exactly the same, analogous cheers David