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The Femme Fatale

For her, it was a cinch to tantalize each man who let his gaze rest on her face. With honey-colored hair and almond eyes, she’d catch most men’s attention anyplace! The brightness of her smile was a facade, which any man caught up with her would soon discover! Oh, she was a ruthless fraud whose soul was more the dark side of the moon! At first she would enrapture -then in time, bewilder each poor sap she’d taken in. To cause fallacious dreams is not a crime, but what she did to those men was a sin. So curious were they to get to know that femme fatale that foolishily they took the plunge into her vortex with its flow of endless greed – like fish caught on her hook. She’d take those fish – the men that she’d suck dry - eviscerate them, and when she was done, just toss them to the dirt – her grand goodbye! Their trail, once scarlet, faded in the sun. June 28, 2018 for John Hamilton's Eight Word Challenge-7 Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/31/2018 3:08:00 PM
Back with congrats on your top win, Andrea.
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Date: 7/29/2018 9:16:00 AM
Very cool poem ;) congrats on your win! xomo
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:07:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. :)
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Date: 7/28/2018 6:06:00 PM
Great imagery in this beautiful Quatrain, Andrea, congratulations on your win.. . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/2/2018 1:51:00 PM
Such an awesome poem, Andrea! Congratulations on your podium win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/30/2018 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this creative story using the 8 words cleverly. An excellent write in every way! :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:52:00 PM
Great tale Andrea. poor sap, I like that line especially lol! Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 6/29/2018 12:22:00 AM
Awesome contest entry, Andrea. A delightful read.
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Date: 6/28/2018 10:34:00 PM
Wow Andrea, this was a stunner! I love what you did with the mandatory words. An evil siren...and they do exist. Haha. This will score high my friend! : )
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Date: 6/28/2018 3:44:00 PM
Wow, do women like that actually exist, perish the thought.lol. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 6/28/2018 3:39:00 PM
Andrea, great story, great rhymes, great word choice and lines. Great quatrain, great truth, perfection comes.. when your pen is loose!!
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Date: 6/28/2018 3:14:00 PM
An amazing quatrain, Andrea.. Wonderful imagery! An exceptional write, Andrea.. Warmest wishes to you!
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Date: 6/28/2018 11:03:00 AM
goosebumps ..in the last quatrain. I am scared of femme fatale's seduction.Great one. Regards>Rajat.
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Date: 6/28/2018 10:02:00 AM
Your poem flows so well with your rhymes..all the words seamlessly incorporated in your story..she sure was a fraud..well depicted for a BIG win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:19:00 AM
Great take on the contest...
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Date: 6/28/2018 9:11:00 AM
Wow, what a great tale Andrea. This poem reads effortlessly and drew quickly from line to line. A wonderful write!
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