The Femme Fatale

For her, it was a cinch to tantalize
each man who let his gaze rest on her face.
With honey-colored hair and almond eyes,
she’d catch most men’s attention anyplace!

The brightness of her smile was a facade,
which any man caught up with her would soon
discover! Oh, she was a ruthless fraud
whose soul was more the dark side of the moon!

At first she would enrapture -then in time,
bewilder each poor sap she’d taken in.
To cause fallacious dreams is not a crime,
but what she did to those men was a sin.

So curious were they to get to know
that femme fatale that foolishily they took
the plunge into her vortex with its flow
of endless greed – like fish caught on her hook.

She’d take those fish – the men that she’d suck dry -
eviscerate them, and when she was done,
just toss them to the dirt – her grand goodbye!
Their trail, once scarlet, faded in the sun.

June 28, 2018 for John Hamilton's Eight Word Challenge-7 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Back with congrats on your top win, Andrea.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Very cool poem ;) congrats on your win! xomo
Gentry Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. :)
Roper Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Great imagery in this beautiful Quatrain, Andrea, congratulations on your win.. . Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Such an awesome poem, Andrea! Congratulations on your podium win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on your win with this creative story using the 8 words cleverly. An excellent write in every way! :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Great tale Andrea. poor sap, I like that line especially lol! Congrats on a great win!
Gauthier Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 12:22 AM
Awesome contest entry, Andrea. A delightful read.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Wow Andrea, this was a stunner! I love what you did with the mandatory words. An evil siren...and they do exist. Haha. This will score high my friend! : )
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Wow, do women like that actually exist, perish the thought.lol. Good luck. Tom.
Man Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Andrea, great story, great rhymes, great word choice and lines. Great quatrain, great truth, perfection comes.. when your pen is loose!!
B. Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 3:14 PM
An amazing quatrain, Andrea.. Wonderful imagery! An exceptional write, Andrea.. Warmest wishes to you!
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 11:03 AM
goosebumps ..in the last quatrain. I am scared of femme fatale's seduction.Great one. Regards>Rajat.
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Your poem flows so well with your rhymes..all the words seamlessly incorporated in your story..she sure was a fraud..well depicted for a BIG win, Andrea.
One Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Great take on the contest...
Wood Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Wow, what a great tale Andrea. This poem reads effortlessly and drew quickly from line to line. A wonderful write!
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