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The Feisty Ocean

Like a freight train
She barrels in
And slams upon the shore
Bringing all her treasured gifts
Up from the ocean floor
Randomly choosing 
she makes a deposit
As if purging her depths
Or cleaning her closet
Then passively leaves
The feisty debater
Will reclaim her trove
When she returns later

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/30/2018 8:09:00 AM
Great personification!! Love it!
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:02:00 PM
The power of the sea.. its sensual!
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:57:00 PM
Delightful poem, Kitty.
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