The Feel of Dawn

I sure am glad I read this after reading "the Face of Dawn"-- this is truly beautiful as well, loving how this one is so descriptive and alive- I could picture this perfectly. This was such a pleasure to read, and smiles on my face...

This one reminded me to be thankful for each new day-- a fresh start. Thank-you for that.

You run with the breeze tanka with the lines 4 and 5 are heartfelt romantic. I like it. I like it a lot. Wonderful. Robert Henry Poulin

returning to this gorgeous poem to say, missing you!

This definitely goes to my favourites.It tickles my romantic side..soo beautiful

Reminds me of D.H Lawrence's freedom. Man can't be more free for expression. Love your comparison because it checks the type of freedom to be expressed by man. Love the motif of freedom. Greatly penned Harry. Love. Angel

Nothing like catching a naked runner before the sun rises. By the end of the week you must be exhausted.

Lovely Harry! I love two last line they are gorgeous :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, Yanny

Beauteous! Words of the heart.

Beautiful images, tender tanka

What a beautiful tanka...Just beautiful Harry

Harry this is a fabulous tanka. I love the second line. You've created a care-free dawn. Warm Smiles, Connie

I can feel the cool touch of dawn with this wonderful poem! Harry! jimbo

you bring me directly into the beauty of dawn's moment.. what a fine work, harry..:) huggs!

Again an excellent beauty feeling adorned with beautiful words. A nice creation. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

Ahh me Harry...What a beauty this is!...You have captured the very essence of morning here...'naked spirit oh so free'...'your smile I catch in the wind'...WOW

Who could not smile upon reading this one!??

Harry, I like this second one even better. One of your very best tanka poems. Luv, Andrea

Great one to express morn's good feelings or one to describe a person maybe..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Sara...I am glad that you chose mine to read..Sara

Another great one, Harry... keep it up... Terry

Yes enjoy every day.....we learn this more the older we get..anyway I sure do...great words Harry....thanks

This is very beautiful Harry. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

- Harry, each line gives me a pleasure - Thank you. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

a write that puts a smile on my face, a good write, enjoyed this one, LUV SKAT

Hi Harry....You're at it again! Making magic....loved this. :) Hugs