The Fault Line

What comes to mind
When you think of the fault line?
Would it be numbers and science,
Or perhaps the heart torn in violence?

Both could be right,
But which would be your first sight?
Is it the mighty platonic plates
Or is it the melody your heart makes?

The earth is a beautiful place
Suspended in endless space.
But pressure cracks have started to show
And yet the earth will continue to grow.

The human heart cannot be mapped
Even though it is in a body trapped.
The crinkles and cracks that begin to appear
Are mostly where hope and joy disappear.

Looking at it from another view
What is the most important to you?
Is it the hard physical facts,
Or the softer emotional acts?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vinson Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Good questions, and a fine, encompassing view, Jane. The next time somebody says, "Take a break," it will be a different world. : )
Jane Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Thanx! You're right, it will be different...
Martin Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Both. Can't say which is more important. Great poem! And question! Congrats! :-)
Jane Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Thank you for the support!
Sands Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations ! :)
Jane Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 2:33 AM
Thank you!
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:54 AM
I would personally always choose "the softer emotional acts". I love your poem, thank you.
Jane Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 1:48 AM
Thank you for your feedback! Glad you enjoyed it!
Green Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 7:50 AM
I guess we all see it differently as your wonderful poem expresses. It all depends on if we are looking in or looking out. At times a fault line is something I feel pointing at me but most times it is a crack in the heart of someone I hope to heal. Really nicely done poetic offering Jane.
Jane Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Thank you for your kind words, I appreciate it. I heartily agree, it all depends on your point of view.
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