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The Fault Line

People running for their lives, Buildings falling, The earth roars and splits, Car’s turn over, The earth is angry, Gaping holes, Collapsed roads, Terror and death, Devastation as disaster attack, Before the stillness comes, But wait! It’s not safe yet! Here it comes again, The aftershock, Rumbling and shaking, As people scream, Then the calm, It stops, Rescuers go into action, People rally round, The trapped are saved, Children pulled from the wreckage, Something mystical happens, In these times of trial, Survival mode, People actually care, They change from the selfish, Into loving human beings. Sadness as the dead is collected, We mourn our loss, As life goes on. 19/11/2016 For contest sponsor Anthony Slausen

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Date: 12/1/2016 4:29:00 PM
Yes! It seems that disasters always bring out the best of humanity. Great writing, Wendy. Sure to be on the winners list. Elaine
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 12/1/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Elaine x
Date: 11/27/2016 6:49:00 AM
I saw it all from above. Thanks for the glimpse. JE
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/27/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by x
Date: 11/23/2016 5:55:00 PM
I love what you said in that one part: about people changing to loving human beings. I hope this will happen when lots of calamities strike our nation!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/24/2016 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Andrea xxx
Date: 11/19/2016 9:55:00 PM
Great descriptions of the events of an earthquake, Wendy. You captured it very well!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/20/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Laura xx
Date: 11/19/2016 8:19:00 PM
Great natural disaster imagery poem Wendy! G/L in the contest!~Che
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/20/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl xxx
Date: 11/19/2016 2:59:00 PM
visual and wonderfully done... i dread to think of areas marked as fault lines for catastrophes, wendy.. huggs
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/19/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thank you, Nette x
Date: 11/19/2016 12:47:00 PM
- It sounds like a nightmare ... a disaster - Great and vibrant written, Wendy - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/19/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine xxxx

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