The Fault Line

People running for their lives,
Buildings falling,
The earth roars and splits,
Car’s turn over,
The earth is angry,
Gaping holes,
Collapsed roads,
Terror and death,
Devastation as disaster attack,
Before the stillness comes,
But wait! 
It’s not safe yet!
Here it comes again,
The aftershock,
Rumbling and shaking,
As people scream,
Then the calm,
It stops,
Rescuers go into action,
People rally round,
The trapped are saved,
Children pulled from the wreckage,
Something mystical happens,
In these times of trial,
Survival mode,
People actually care,
They change from the selfish,
Into loving human beings.
Sadness as the dead is collected,
We mourn our loss,
As life goes on.

19/11/2016
For contest sponsor
Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Yes! It seems that disasters always bring out the best of humanity. Great writing, Wendy. Sure to be on the winners list. Elaine
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December 1, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Elaine x
Eldridge Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:49 AM
I saw it all from above. Thanks for the glimpse. JE
Rycroft Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Thank you for dropping by x
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 5:55 PM
I love what you said in that one part: about people changing to loving human beings. I hope this will happen when lots of calamities strike our nation!
Rycroft Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Thank you Andrea xxx
Leiser Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Great descriptions of the events of an earthquake, Wendy. You captured it very well!
Rycroft Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Laura xx
Hoffman Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Great natural disaster imagery poem Wendy! G/L in the contest!~Che
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November 20, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Cheryl xxx
Onclaud Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:59 PM
visual and wonderfully done... i dread to think of areas marked as fault lines for catastrophes, wendy.. huggs
Rycroft Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Thank you, Nette x
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 12:47 PM
- It sounds like a nightmare ... a disaster - Great and vibrant written, Wendy - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Thank you Sunshine xxxx
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