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The Fault In Our Stars

I was completely alone struggling with a demon called cancer I didn't seek for a cure , just a one little answer How the story will end Then I've met you , fell in love with what you are, the flawless destiny brought you to me You gave me a new life , full of happiness completely different about what it used to be Now my soul is connected to you I gave you my favorite book to read And you gave me another from a different bread Then you mailed my favorite writer to answer about what I seek To Amsterdam we decided to fly But never thought that before I go I must die You gave me your last wish Lucky me I fought so well Went to amisterdam , then back to hell You were too sick , even more than I but you hid your pain I've stood by your side through your own fight Hope I can get this twisted end right But I was too late I had to stood in your funeral to say the word of goodbye God damn it, how much I wished if this was just a freaking lie You passed away and I've stayed with my sorrow It was not your fault nor mine to fall in love , the fault in our stars It's their fault to cause us these un destructible scares I've got your last letter , and tears went like a waterfall down on my face But I swear to you my love to never forget you , you'll be remembered as your last wish For the favorite movie contest Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2016 9:13:00 AM

Interesting work..What was the title of the movie?? Maybe the same as the title of the poem..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sara

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 9:19:00 AM

Yes my dear sara it's called the fault in our stars , thank you my dear for ur sweet and delightful words, hugs / / :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/5/2016 7:34:00 AM

This was really deep Dalia, and just overall a great delight to read. The last lines are powerful and beautiful. I really love the line, " the flawless destiny brought you to me." The beginning stanza is also so good..loved this! Always, Laura

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 7:43:00 AM

Thank you very much sweet laura for your beautiful and delightful comment , I appreciate your incorrigin words it means alot for me, happy that you liked it my dear, have a lovely, sweet day such as you, hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/5/2016 1:58:00 AM

I like to think that the favorite book you shared is the book of your very heart Dalia, and that his was likewise that of his heart, and to think your favorite author is God would be so right and romantic. To be blameless lovers, at the mercy of fickle stars...the scars of love keep us alive. I love how sensitive you are, its very rare, to have that virtue and vulnerability matched to poetic talent, and love tender Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 7:15:00 AM

Thank you very much my friend for ur supportive words and your pleasant, delightful and sweet comment , it means alot for me , and I'm honored by every little word you just said , I consider you as my rule model, so many thanks for your amazing feedback and your mesmerizing words.....hugs / / :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/4/2016 5:50:00 PM

Very powerful and full of emotion. It says a lot and yet doesn’t dwell on the pain. The simple words are expressive and convey strong emotions well. Sad, short and filled with disappointment and anger. Emile.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/4/2016 6:20:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur delightful visit and your mesmerizing feedback , I really do appreciate it , and I'm glad you liked it , many thanks and hugs....// :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/4/2016 4:05:00 PM

A very depth write. You penned this well friend. Good luck in the contest.........A.M.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/4/2016 4:51:00 PM

Thank you very much my friend for ur supportive and delightful words it means alot for me.....hugs / / :)