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The Fault

This, a collapsing division Of our longest standing divide; Ours, a sole carnate revision Of that which we would once deride; As all the bitter tastes we taste, Such burning cold and ugly snow, And each break fades out in its haste, A livid vine living to grow And fester as a parting gift-- Once wolven-skinned compassion-- Brandishing a new schism and rift-- Now sheep-skinned and thus impassioned, Sheathen false wings of Seraphim, To rust and field this frightened fold, Mercurial from limb to limb, The acidic fall to behold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 3:43:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dominic. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:27:00 PM
nice one, good flow to it
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Date: 4/27/2010 1:19:00 PM
Great rhythm in this one..Interesting thoughts put down...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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