The Fate of Future

THE FATE OF FUTURE

A romp of childhood, descending my steep driveway, to the bus.
My urgent path lit dimly, filled with compacted snow, shoveled

with steel blades. I wearing a woolen coat, always late.
Still on time, before great big wheels grind down a country road.

Youth, with hair still damp, long and fine, shyness hides inside.
Tired teens, all around me, I watch the wipers swipe morning flurries.

The repetitive motion, bestowing comfort, like a lullaby -
before the din of crowded classrooms and impertinent teachers.

My math teacher, with a schnoz that crests Everest, 
an informer of intelligent students. Less inclined

to teach her fearful ones, to shame us with a shun.
A glare of eagle spectacles, nearly scorning our dark plight.

Yet, classrooms with nouns, adjectives, verbs spur me on
to serendipitous highs. I fly with Kilmer, dip with Plath.

I lean forward as psychology and sociology take me by the arms.
I feel the fate of future, the lovely breeze has dried my hair, sublime.

9/5/2017
Non Rhyming couplets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Harris Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 3:33 PM
I find this poem interesting. A discription a time in the past during a season of winter flurries. A feeling of country living growing up. Interesting. Here we are today. Nicely painted.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Thank you, Michael! So glad you enjoyed.
White Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:56 AM
Fantastic couplets, the enjambment works wonderfully here. "Fly with Kilmer, dip with Plath" is a wonderful line.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Thanks so much, Darren! <3 Kim
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:02 PM
A nostalgic write...nicely done Kim...god bless...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, my friend! <3 Kim
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Lovely story from the good old days--well written, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, Vijay! <3 Kim
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 2:00 PM
A very poetically interesting flashback, Kim. Who we are now is always in part from who were were back then. Mighty fine poetry ... very creative too. Love and joy always.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Muideen Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:17 PM
You have penned a beautiful poem here my friend, Kim. Your gem flows eloquent and well written. Thanks for sharing.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Thank you, Afolabi! I really appreciate it! Trying out writing in with a slower pen. <3 Kim
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