The Fatality

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Before birth
I was the universe
All knowing, all embracing
Molecules of beauty in floating meditations
I was everywhere 

Then............
The darkness.........
The womb.......
I begot limbs and flesh
Imprisoned inside this human frailty

I was freed, exposed, pushed, fallen into humanity
Lights, voices, sins, I screamed
They cut off my only bond to the universe
Here, a baby an orphan of the heavens
Imprisoned upon the imperfections of human realms

Hell.................
The holy book of sins...........
The great sadness.........
I miss the cosmic beauty
Stuck here, the devils collection of earthly kin

Days... weeks.....decades…. despair......
I plotted and planned
The great escape
From this finite boxed in land
I begged the infinite, and danced with infinity

The universe waltzed
I twirled with insightful delight
Soon, to be rejoined with eternal light
To be free, to roam the stars
My death, now rejoined with the heavens and all of thee

You visit, candles and crocus upon Parisian stone
I am neither there or even here any more
I have become what I once was, healed and whole
All knowing, all embracing
I am God, the universe once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/27/2016 10:48:00 AM
Light and Darkness, both hold immense power. Man thinks himself great yet surely we are a tiny , tiny speck in a small galaxy that may even in itself contain other tiny specks light-years away.. The Universe sings-we may join in but for a very, very brief moment(A MERE BLINK OF THE EYE). Deep and strong verses my friend... A7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/2/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert.
Date: 6/22/2016 7:54:00 AM
For me I have enjoyed this method of transportation I have been gifted. I do however also imagine what is to be. Great poem Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/2/2016 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Richard! This was inspired by a great Persian poet, Ghalib, I merely retold a story of sorts!
Date: 6/20/2016 9:30:00 AM
Awesome write. Pretty much sums up my personal cosmology...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/2/2016 11:28:00 PM
Than you, this was inspired by a great poet far wiser than I, Ghalib
Date: 6/19/2016 5:26:00 PM
Fascinating imagery Arthur:-) hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/2/2016 11:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan, Hugs!
Date: 6/18/2016 11:16:00 PM
This is great Arthur.. beautiful
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/2/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you,hate that dont get email notifications anymore.
Date: 6/18/2016 10:32:00 PM
Always fascinating work :-) Hugs Eve
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/2/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thanks Eve, sorry for late response!
Date: 6/18/2016 10:22:00 PM
Fear not death, it is what awaits us all, you go where there is no pain, no fear, and at peace, and there you see everyone and everything you ever loved, people pets and so much to love, Blessed Be and namaste to all, love and light be you guide!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/18/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thanks Billy great to see you back on poetry chat!
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