The Fashion of Passion

I saw a girl whose legs were spangled,
They were so long that they easily tangled.
And when she wore her high heeled shoes,
She was a package no man could refuse.
Because when she walked she started to sway,
And set things in motion just the right way.
Lines of young men will stare as she passes,
Hoping for a smile or a bat of her lashes.
But the beautiful girl can’t stop to flirt,
Because her shoes make her feet hurt.
And all she wants is to walk in bare feet,
So when each day ended she’d always retreat.
Off came her shoes when she entered the door.
Because of the pain that she couldn’t ignore.
She’d rub her feet with a smile on her face,
Remembering how well she’d run the day’s race.
The look in their eyes gave her great satisfaction,
She’d received the rewards of each man’s reaction.
Alone in her room she’d sit with her prize,
Her two feet swollen to the next larger size.
I’m not sure which ones are more confused,
The girl herself or the men that she’d used,
To me it seems that she’s playing a game,
And when she wins it she’s alone and lame.
I don’t really get just why she’d play,
What dividends can it possibly pay?
I guess it depends on defining your passion,
And I’ve never been one to understand fashion.

For the Genius or Criminal? contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/28/2011 11:35:00 AM
You sure create wonderful stories with your verse. This one is really special and goes into my favs. Never did find your Solomen one!
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Date: 9/30/2011 1:13:00 PM
I guess some women just enjoy the attention, Tony, or we wouldn't see so many walking around in painful shoes and skimpy attire. Give me jeans, a T-shirt and flip flops and the men can look at those who play this fashion game. Great write! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:48:00 AM
I can't resist though-my calfs look so adorable in my stilettos :) Love it Tony-Great job-congrats. on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Tony. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie, Tony
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Date: 9/29/2011 12:34:00 AM
tony, the way you approached the theme of the contest was GREAT. I mean, you really captured the essence of criminal or genius but on a small scale. I really enjoyed this one. Yes, girls do a LOT of hard stuff to get attention. Must be in the genes!!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2011 10:39:00 PM
Congrats Tony on another excelelnt win with dazzling words reflecting contest theme luv.. superbly penned ...
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Date: 9/20/2011 8:08:00 AM
DING DING DING......I smell a WINNER!!!!!!! High heel shoes are for SISSIES, Tony! Great stuff here. You should be proud. Soupy Mail. Gwendolen
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