The Fanch-Interior with Women

Standing on my head
looking up at the trees
and the sparkling sky

When it’s dark I don’t see
the ship float by nor
the tsunami sea

Upside-down women
on either side
of cotton candy eventide

When the light’s bright
palms and ferns come to life
tickling my soles

and I am able 
to rearrange the houseplants
with my toes

How much harder it is
to apprehend the tossed high heels
and the mute parrot

high and higher
almost in flight
but I catch them

as I carry on
with lethargic lids
that never seam

The minute I close them
my baby-faced muse
pries them open
 
with a seam ripper
and I flick the light back on
and then to annoy her

I hit the switch
so I can view the “Fanch”
in the Hitchcock hour

Truly, I am reclining
and in turn propelling 
out of my chair

It’s been a long day
I won’t bore you with its tales
I’ll just point you to

the simple fact
that artwork looks different
hanging

upside-down
or inside-out
or Cubist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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January 23, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Kim, the perspective shifts with the different ways of looking at things. Having experiences while standing on the head and the different observations you make from this unique vantage point is an intriguing experience
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad!
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 4:08 AM
I need to check out this artwork. Yes, that Cubist artwork and some other more modern art is kind of far out there. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Sara!
George Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:46 PM
You have beautifully described the change it brings in perspective and dimensions when an art work especially the cubist or modern painting when hung upside down. This is a poem so unique and the theme so very unorthodox. Enjoyed the beauty and novelty of this poem, dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa! :) Have a great week!
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 5:02 PM
You have raw talent. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, one can read it many times. You must paint- or like painting. Awesome. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Paige! :) I do love paintings :)
One Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 5:00 AM
You really created the image here.. Great use of the form..
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Rolland Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 9:04 PM
i can't translate "fanch", oooppps, is it about seduction ? about art, however, that is awesome inspiration, have a sweet week end
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 9:53 PM
Fanch is an artist :)
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