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The reindeer unscrewed all their bulbs. Each nose of the famous of all rebelled of their Dad, his youngsters’ so bad. The night, with no lights, elves recall. Santa’s sleigh out of control - the snow mixed with glass. The reindeer’s too big for their britches, Santa’s spanking would last. hindquarters on fire oh deer the feet on sharp shards piece back their noses What of Santa’s sleigh? It landed on treehouse roof This was not a goof… Santa knew what would happen. This kid hiding from Christmas would help deliver the gifts. This is why Santa can “Ho ho ho.” He knows which way the wind will blow. He knows who’s naughty or nice. Rudolph’s grands on the list twice. 12/14/2021

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Date: 12/17/2021 8:24:00 AM
Rudolph! You put your grands on the list twice? You know Santa KNOWS; he knows when you are naughty, and nice. Right? Cute Kim, super dooper cute!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2021 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, my super duper friend!
Date: 12/14/2021 8:05:00 PM
That reindeer's nose is a bit 'bulb-ous,' don't you think?! Enjoyed this one, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thanks for the hearty laugh, Gershon! :):)
Date: 12/14/2021 4:30:00 PM
Fun way to retell santa and rudolph the red nose raindeer story. Loved it, Kim Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2021 5:00:00 AM
Blessings to you too and Merry Christmas, Bill! Thank you!
Date: 12/14/2021 11:26:00 AM
An enjoyable Christmas tale Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2021 12:53:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/14/2021 9:15:00 AM
Very original, Kim. You gave me a smile. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2021 9:33:00 AM
Smiling you way too :) Thanks
Date: 12/14/2021 7:42:00 AM
Love this one! So adorable. I love this most famous one :) God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2021 8:05:00 AM
LOL! Thank you! :) Love Kim ~ hugs

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