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The Famous of All

The reindeer unscrewed all their bulbs.
        Each nose of the famous of all
    rebelled of their Dad,
his youngsters’ so bad.
The night, with no lights, elves recall.

Santa’s sleigh out of control -
     the snow mixed with glass.
The reindeer’s too big for their britches,
          Santa’s spanking would last.

          hindquarters on fire
oh deer the feet on sharp shards
     piece back their noses

       What of Santa’s sleigh?
    It landed on treehouse roof
         This was not a goof…
Santa knew what would happen.
This kid hiding from Christmas
would help deliver the gifts.

  This is why Santa can “Ho ho ho.”
He knows which way the wind will blow.
     He knows who’s naughty or nice.
          Rudolph’s grands on the list twice.

12/14/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Rudolph! You put your grands on the list twice? You know Santa KNOWS; he knows when you are naughty, and nice. Right? Cute Kim, super dooper cute!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Thank you, my super duper friend!
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:05 PM
That reindeer's nose is a bit 'bulb-ous,' don't you think?! Enjoyed this one, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thanks for the hearty laugh, Gershon! :):)
Baker Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Fun way to retell santa and rudolph the red nose raindeer story. Loved it, Kim Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Blessings to you too and Merry Christmas, Bill! Thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 11:26 AM
An enjoyable Christmas tale Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Thank you, Tom! Merry Christmas!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Very original, Kim. You gave me a smile. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Smiling you way too :) Thanks
Mcintosh Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Love this one! So adorable. I love this most famous one :) God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:05 AM
LOL! Thank you! :) Love Kim ~ hugs
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