The Family Home

I live in a house
built of bricks,
not in the city,
out in the sticks.
It's not the best
but it will do.
Wild front garden
and back one too.
Needs a little love and care,
The living room carpet
is thread bare.
Lots of hard work
all around
but the foundations
are quite sound.
It's just right for me and mine.
Living here 
we've done just fine.
Away from the pollution
of the city,
forfeiting the shops,
a bit of a pity.
I left the city 
years ago,
so as my family
could peacefully grow.
I'm glad I moved
from the city
to here.
It's less dangerous,
little to fear.
We've had it good
and we've 
had it bad
but we're mostly happy
and rarely sad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ansari Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Cool descripitions. Love the poem. Ib*
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 1:13 PM
A cute way to describe the feeling of "home"... MC
Ryerson Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 6:00 AM
LOVE this poem Jenny... Very short, succinct lines with good flow...So glad you found your dream home - Tim
Newman Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Well done rhyme rhythm and flow excellent very smooth read, your imagery is perfect, your home sounds superb, a home is where the heart is and full of love, , great poem, blessings sueellen
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 2:33 AM
A warm adorable poem on d outskirts away frm city pollution, wow! Pls do read my latest too.
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