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The Falling Out

The Falling Out I find the ceiling fan quite interesting – a whirling meditation; -- blades whiz! – air cooling unseen yet felt apparently all affecting not overtly visible how one’s heart reacts to currents oblivious to detached others -- when we had our falling out a great storm rocked worlds no mention by the local meteorologist nor cosmologist seismologist or an especial priest -- What’s one more or less, our universe~ to the greater emotional theme?

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Date: 7/26/2025 11:29:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "The Falling Out" write. Could Not live without the ceiling fans. In life many people come then go. Great Ending... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/26/2025 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, Paula; many people come...as far as I know, we all go....:))

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