The Fallen Star

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~The Fallen Star~ 
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I can't still believe that millions have fallen and fall for all those lies, 
Yes, I am very aware that Satan's ways and bag of tricks, are too many, just to count 
He's the greatest liar and traitor that ever has lived and sin has produced 
Once, he'd it all but for greed and pride he betrayed his own Creator God 

Satan never stops deceiving us all, I can tell you that 
He's always on the move, roaming around the whole earth, 
Seeking new souls to pervert and steer them stray and send away 
Forever and ever from the Glorious Kingdom of God and its Creator 

He accuse us all in front of God and sneers at us laughing when we sin 
Satan is the great deceiver, hate us all and we should always send him away 
When he tempted us he just knows how to push our buttons in the right way 
This angel of perdition gives us the world but in the end we may lose our very souls 

Satan's ways are just too much to pay for, what's the use of having it all here, if we lose our precious soul and eternity 
In God's glorious kingdom that's Heaven, for you see, Satan the great deceiver of all, already knows that God has won! 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2006 


February.07.2015


~Important note from the author~ 

For more information you can always read these passages in the Holy Scriptures: (Satan fall from Heaven) Isaih 14:12-15 ~ (Satan the accuser) Job 1:12 ~ (Satan the tempter) 1 Thessalonians 3:5 ~ (Satan's destiny)Romans 16:20 ~

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Date: 3/7/2015 7:22:00 AM
The good book calls him the accuser of our brethren but in Jesus we have a friend who is always pleading our case with the spirit crying Abba father. the creator is our Father and descendants of Adam we are heirs of the kingdom. the deceiver does his level best to make us fall from grace by perverting our souls into pride like him.. but for the fallen of man there is atonement - the deceiver none for he acts out of malice and contempt for our creator and his right to rule**thanks for this one**
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Date: 3/7/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, Lewis, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated dear friend! Have a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D .
Date: 2/14/2015 1:50:00 AM
The Pope should talk about Satan instead of attending Parliament in Strasbourg and involving himself in politics. ---------- A good poem and fine pictures. It gets a Facebook Like, and 7 from me. Love, Alicia, xx
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Date: 2/14/2015 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so kindly Alicia, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D
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