The Fallen Men

Bows ready

They pulled

They reached

The wraiths, in their hundreds slain

Of arms aching

Of pain

 

The wraiths

In their angst and pain

Took the ones

That suffered again and again

 

The fallen men

Felt the cold bitter heart

Of their weaknesses

That they could not conquer

Time and time again

 

They were lost

With the wraiths

We gathered up our dead

The grievous cost

In a company  of men

 

We remember

The day well

Battles won

Thoughts dwell

Of men lost

Heads bowed

We honoured them

Under the dying cloud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 3, 2009 at 7:31 PM
You describe the spiritual and physical cost of war very well, Matthew. It seems we can never do enough to truly honor those who serve to protect our freedom. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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