The Fall of the Winter King

The Fall of The Winter King    

He had risen to power
fueled by a vicious and ruthless determination
to reclaim a lost throne.

His tactics had stunned the unsuspecting,
laid barren the fields,
blanketed the forest,
silenced the sounds of life itself.

A dictator, seeking no counsel,
accepting no offers of surrender,
driven by the desire to destroy
the kingdom that had usurped his throne.

Rumors spread of a daring bud – sprouting -
a tune hummed by the imprisoned trees
adrift on the whipping winds of war
in defiance of the heartless king.
A call to arms sounded
by the most gentle, the most delicate.

The first acts of open rebellion,
The resounding crack of the ice jamb
the aching roar of the river’s rage
surging over its banks
awakening those still held captive.

Slowly the insurrection took root
buds gathered in hidden clusters,
trees quietly bloomed
muffling the screeching gales,
offering safety to bands of rebels.
Flocks of warblers met -
feathered archers - hurling their
darting arrows against the glare
of a cold king’s horror.

Sweet grasses spread across
the brown, despoiled fields -
a verdant gauntlet tossed in the face of dread.
Flowers crept from thawing dungeons
waving their colors,
swarms of banished pollinators
followed the call to duty.

The ebb and flow of battle -
frosted retreats,
clandestine sunrise maneuvers.
The resurgence of heart,
the growing hope of warmth.

As memory of the chilled repression
faded preparation was made
to receive the beauty and bounty
of a new and peaceful King. 


John G. Lawless
1/11/2015

For SKAT’s Winter’s End – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ebbs Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Congrats John on your win :)
Haight Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Love your take on this, John! What a battle you describe! Thank good newss the "new and peaceful King" finally wins each year! Congrats on your fine win. 7+Fav, Sandra
A   Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:08 PM
John, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Thanks Linda, always nice to hear from you.
A  Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 10:58 AM
John. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:18 PM
My pleasure SKAT, and it was a winter we never thought would end. appreciate the time and effort you put into the contest that allow so many of us to play
Yvonne Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 3:39 PM
John this is a spectacular write. A fav for me. I am convinced this will do very well in the contest.
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Maurice, thanks for the fav and it did place well in the contest.
Leiser Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 4:31 PM
You have a great command of vocabulary in this descriptive poem. Very well done. A 7 from me!
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Thanks Laura, I sorta fell way behind this one with follow up. Appreciate the high mark.
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 7:17 AM
hey John love the write, very imaginative and well written,keep me wanting more as I read,good luck in the contest
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Robert, this one got lost in the 9.5 feet of snow i was shoveling. A belated Thanks for your comment. As I found out today it did place in the contest.
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