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The Fall of the Black Angels

This last few years Had seen fighting so coarse Having vowed never to fight Viewing histories remorse The black angels of angst Went back on their word The earth for themselves It's what they preferred No explanation No discussions met Their war on the innocents In their mind was set Attacks they launched No one was spared Children slaughtered They did not care Weeks and months Passed like days Earth to be lost In their deathly plays A time traveller From the past was called Semaj to the Galaxy His past exploits recalled He was the one Who downed Racolyn The Butterfly winged Elf Never to be seen again The Parliament of Federation His presence requested The read of his past Again to be tested In hangers were gathered Angels in flocks Like squadrons of light Beside their space ships docked Loaded on board The water of life In missile form To rid the black strife Orders given The space ships depart To save natures earth Again to restart Co-ordinates entered Black angels located The water of life Divine of the created All weapons are primed Loaded to demise Ignore the crying For the blackened dying Hours and days As the white angels fought With Semaj leading In heraldic taught Black angels retreating Their fight fading to light The last of them captured Earths Parliament in delight We thank Semaj And Etto his droid Another scar for this planet In possible avoid The war of the angels Had come to an end White versus black In victorious mend On this planet earth In it's year 2338 White angels are predominant Nature's soul mate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 5:30:00 AM
What a journey through time! Excellent write and thank you for your comments. LM
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:08:00 AM
I feel like I have been on a ride through time with dark angels ... this is wonderful !!! love Jayne x x x
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Date: 9/5/2009 4:29:00 PM
black and white and dead all over. No need to look in the future, this is the running theme throughout all time, forever to the past and future. Black vs white, good vs evil, always pushing and pulling, swaying, both equally murderous but for their own definition of righteousness. Both seeking control of the heart, niether one ever succeeding for more than a few generations. no war can end all wars. no peace is everlasting. Not in this world anyway. Great 'fiction' James. Quite the eye opener.
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Date: 9/5/2009 8:30:00 AM
Dear James, Thank you for the enthralling futuristic journey. I enjoyed it immensely. Lainie
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:30:00 AM
Nice to a happy ending for good to win over evil in the end. Great fantasy. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 1:39:00 AM
Very awesome dear Highlander. Kept me rivieted to the end. The Southern Belle
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Date: 9/4/2009 6:25:00 PM
What an imaginative tale, James! I'm on a borrowed laptop. Had to check your latest work. You should be writing sci-fi/erotica novels (lol). Great work! Love, carolyn
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