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The Fall of the Black Angels

This last few years
Had seen fighting so coarse
Having vowed never to fight
Viewing histories remorse
 
The black angels of angst
Went back on their word
The earth for themselves
It's what they preferred
 
No explanation
No discussions met
Their war on the innocents
In their mind was set
 
Attacks they launched
No one was spared
Children slaughtered
They did not care
 
Weeks and months
Passed like days
Earth to be lost
In their deathly plays
 
A time traveller
From the past was called
Semaj to the Galaxy
His past exploits recalled
 
He was the one
Who downed Racolyn
The Butterfly winged Elf
Never to be seen again
 
The Parliament of Federation
His presence requested
The read of his past
Again to be tested
 
In hangers were gathered
Angels in flocks
Like squadrons of light
Beside their space ships docked
 
Loaded on board
The water of life
In missile form
To rid the black strife
 
Orders given
The space ships depart
To save natures earth
Again to restart
 
Co-ordinates entered
Black angels located
The water of life
Divine of the created
 
All weapons are primed
Loaded to demise
Ignore the crying
For the blackened dying
 
Hours and days
As the white angels fought
With Semaj leading
In heraldic taught
 
Black angels retreating 
Their fight fading to light
The last of them captured
Earths Parliament in delight
 
We thank Semaj
And Etto his droid
Another scar for this planet
In possible avoid
 
The war of the angels
Had come to an end
White versus black
In victorious mend
 
On this planet earth
In it's year 2338
White angels are predominant
Nature's soul mate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 5:30:00 AM
What a journey through time! Excellent write and thank you for your comments. LM
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:08:00 AM
I feel like I have been on a ride through time with dark angels ... this is wonderful !!! love Jayne x x x
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Date: 9/5/2009 4:29:00 PM
black and white and dead all over. No need to look in the future, this is the running theme throughout all time, forever to the past and future. Black vs white, good vs evil, always pushing and pulling, swaying, both equally murderous but for their own definition of righteousness. Both seeking control of the heart, niether one ever succeeding for more than a few generations. no war can end all wars. no peace is everlasting. Not in this world anyway. Great 'fiction' James. Quite the eye opener.
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Date: 9/5/2009 8:30:00 AM
Dear James, Thank you for the enthralling futuristic journey. I enjoyed it immensely. Lainie
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:30:00 AM
Nice to a happy ending for good to win over evil in the end. Great fantasy. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 1:39:00 AM
Very awesome dear Highlander. Kept me rivieted to the end. The Southern Belle
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Date: 9/4/2009 6:25:00 PM
What an imaginative tale, James! I'm on a borrowed laptop. Had to check your latest work. You should be writing sci-fi/erotica novels (lol). Great work! Love, carolyn
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