The Fall of Rome

In the closing days of Rome 
when the end was drawing near,
There appeared at the cities edge 
a noble charioteer. 

He gazed down from atop the seven hills 
at the city’s crumbling glory,
And let his thoughts drift back in time 
to the once magnificent story.

How from this city of power 
a mighty army would assemble,
To dispense the Roman way of life 
and make the whole world tremble.

But now it seems the world has changed 
the name of Rome has jaded,
The power that once belonged to her 
has all but completely faded.

And the charioteer holds tight to the reins 
to steady up the wheels,
And sits and waits there patiently 
For fate to catch him by the heels.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 8:17 AM
Nothing stays the same. Time changes everything. Great writing, Tony. Thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Originally this was about my Father-in-law being put into a wheelchair and the last line was, "For a nurse to take him to his meals."
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 1:04 AM
Wonderful write...indeed jaded and rotting from within....with love....old Jack
Fringe Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 12:14 AM
Do you mean Diocles? I just googled it. Either way, I love writing like this. Anything about Rome is up my alley. Good write. Thanks for your kind comment on my Star Trek write.
Wesley Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 6:30 PM
What a great verse Tony, I love the story and you told it well with great rhyme.
Culverhouse Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 6:23 PM
funny....yet seems like a way of life was over thrown. Like in many wars.
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