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The Fall of Rome

In the closing days of Rome when the end was drawing near, There appeared at the cities edge a noble charioteer. He gazed down from atop the seven hills at the city’s crumbling glory, And let his thoughts drift back in time to the once magnificent story. How from this city of power a mighty army would assemble, To dispense the Roman way of life and make the whole world tremble. But now it seems the world has changed the name of Rome has jaded, The power that once belonged to her has all but completely faded. And the charioteer holds tight to the reins to steady up the wheels, And sits and waits there patiently For fate to catch him by the heels.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/22/2011 8:17:00 AM
Nothing stays the same. Time changes everything. Great writing, Tony. Thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie
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Date: 8/22/2011 2:37:00 PM
Originally this was about my Father-in-law being put into a wheelchair and the last line was, "For a nurse to take him to his meals."
Date: 8/20/2011 1:04:00 AM
Wonderful write...indeed jaded and rotting from within....with love....old Jack
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Date: 8/20/2011 12:14:00 AM
Do you mean Diocles? I just googled it. Either way, I love writing like this. Anything about Rome is up my alley. Good write. Thanks for your kind comment on my Star Trek write.
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Date: 8/19/2011 6:30:00 PM
What a great verse Tony, I love the story and you told it well with great rhyme.
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Date: 8/19/2011 6:23:00 PM
funny....yet seems like a way of life was over thrown. Like in many wars.
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