The Fall Contest

One sweet smell of fall can be easily obtained,
Captivated by the changes in the scent of tranquil rain,
Taking in the crisp, clean, breezy air
Original memories invade my head of times I have shared
Borrowing deep inside my silky sheets
Enjoying the fragrance of fire places burning on my street
Reminiscing of days of old, watching as the season unfolds.


By: Sabina Nicole
Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Nicely done and great win. Joyce
Ramage Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 11:28 PM
I really like the way you incorporated the smell of fall, you're absolutely right. I said last week when I let my dog out in the morning, it smells like fall. Well done. congratulations on your win. Lee
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,sabina
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:02 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
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September 7, 2011 at 4:40 PM
How wonderful that you painted a 'visual' picture with scents! All those aromas put a lot of very pleasant pictures in my mind's eye. Well done and congrats from Cyndi
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September 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Sabina, I could picture, hear and even smell fall when reading your beautiful poem. Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
Williams Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 1:00 PM
hey Sabina congrats on your win..David
Freeman Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Sabina, Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE." A great pleasure to see your poem in first place. Agape, Moses
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September 7, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
Sweetheart Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Congrats Sabina on first place win with this cool write on Fall luv..
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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September 3, 2011 at 4:15 AM
WOW~~~ all of the given months were given an acrostic form~~~so talented...thumbs up for this one my friend~~~winning wishes~~~*-*jun-jun
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