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The Fall

Eve of fall
denuding of trees
No longer lush whispers heard through the leaves

A low pitched moan a creak here and there
In warning to all listening
to heed and beware

The salad days behind us
and winters hounds approach
Ravenously looking for remnants of life to poach

The air increasingly
bearing a sting in the fog of new day
the  fickle sun wears a ring

Announcing its departure
Rushing to its betrothed
On the other side of the world in silver arraignment clothed

The trees declaring without fail
Some years more vibrant than last
The comings and  the goings that happen much too fast

Caught up in lifes bounty unable to see
that summer would end we couldn't believe
we'd witness its death and solemnly grieve

Pulling tight our woolen wear
to the inner rooms we go
to pray once more for early spring and awaite the sleet and snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/15/2023 12:28:00 PM
This is a great autumnal poem Vickey. Well written with great flow and also very descriptive. Love the lines, in particular, ‘Caught up in life’s bounty unable to see’’ that summer would end we couldn’t believe’. Really enjoyed it Thank you for sharing. :) :)
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 10/16/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you for reading it and your kind comment.
Date: 9/25/2023 9:40:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to fall, Vicky. Bring my favorite time of year. Enjoy the day my friend.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/26/2023 8:47:00 PM
Thanks Jerry.You have good week yourself.
Date: 9/24/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Dilly.
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