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The Fairy Tale

THE FAIRY TALE Long ago, far away As the elderly birch trees say There lived a beautiful girl, in the castle of misty dreams, Her eyes were abyssal,covered by angel's wings The smell of mystery lingered in her dark hair But she never smiled,never talked,dark clouds hovering o'er her pallid face Dreams and dreams hurried away through the window of her distant gaze. No wonder the castle hid itself in the fog of loneliness, All day long it cried and cried waiting for the sunlight. Till one day the winds raced,through the walls of the dark castle Every tree and every bird looked in awe,as God glided through the forest He moved in speed towards that window, the once silent forest gossiped about his arrival. Her little heart jumped and hummed like the commotion outside, To catch a glimpse of him she spread her gaze wide.. He loomed across her window, still, for the first time. He thought, he found, what he searched, whom he knew through the ages All the happiness came alive as letters out of the amber pages. She knew she cried, she never smiled as she was waiting to be found, Watching him so close by, her heart rhymed the only sound. The clouds raced far away, Through the mist the sunrays made way, the misty dreams melted away. One embrace,one silent gaze,she smiled, the alabaster foam danced over the waves, The rosy colour flew across her beautiful face. The trees sang, the birds tweeted, the octaves danced on their own The seeds of love found their way out of the rock one again. Long ago, far away... The castle glowed, the gloom faded away..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/21/2016 12:11:00 AM
dey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/16/2015 2:14:00 AM
Hi Moumita, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/13/2015 9:18:00 PM
Moumita, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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