The Fairie Beast

The Fairie Beast

He was smaller than most
but larger than some
and only last week
he’d been sucking his thumb

when he spied in the bushes
the curious sight
pixie gold creatures
near the edge of the night.

He covered his face
and rubbed his stunned eyes
then looked again
and to his surprise

found them still there
even more than before
arriving it seemed
through a garden floor door.

He edged his nose closer
as if drawn by the scent
of these miniature Fairies
as they came and they went.

T’was then that he saw
the Gnome marble eyes
peering at him
from his gnomic disguise

grumbling now with wrinkly nose
he spoke, this old Gnome,
in an unfriendly tone
 “Hey kid, go on home.”

Then suddenly all
were trembling and scared,
as a horrible growl
deepened and neared.

They froze as if caught
in the ice breath of frost
for they had come early
not knowing the cost.


There was no escape’
no exit by cape
for someone had closed
the garden floor door.

Then the beast of the growl
let out a foul howl
a shuddering yelp
as if calling for help

for in his haste
he had stuck in his snout
now he was caught
and couldn’t get out.

The Fairies all whispered
the Gnome only sneered
they wanted to help him
it did sound quite weird

to free the “grand beastie”
to just set him free
and hope that he wouldn’t
eat both them and me.

And so they agreed
to do this good deed
to hope for the best
after he had been freed.

With the help of such kindness
and the Fairie’s dust wand
that night in the garden
they formed a strange bond

of human and Fairie
and great hairy beast,
sat and enjoyed
a Gnome/Fairie feast.

Now in the garden
near the edge of the night
hear the great beastie snoring
see the Fairies in flight.

John G. Lawless/7/9/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/18/2014 2:43:00 PM
John, , Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:40:00 PM
What a fun tale. :) well done winner :)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, appreciate you comment
Date: 7/16/2014 4:32:00 AM
winsome tale i'd like one to read me at night, john... sweet congrats!.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:54:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I used to make up stories and tell them to my kids using their stuffed animals as the cast.
Date: 7/16/2014 12:57:00 AM
Greatly penned John,, congrats on merited top win!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:53:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting
Date: 7/16/2014 12:15:00 AM
A great story told well. I loved it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:52:00 PM
Always good to hear from you Joyce, thanks for your support
Date: 7/15/2014 7:27:00 PM
wonderful write a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xxx
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2014 7:04:00 PM
Great meter and rhyme, John. A really cute tale as well.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:50:00 PM
Thanks Roy, I had fun writing it.
Date: 7/15/2014 3:27:00 PM
My kinda writing John. Stories to poetry, especially rhyme, and your poem had me wanting to go back and read it again. Congratulations on your win, James.....
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John Lawless
Date: 7/16/2014 8:50:00 PM
James, thank you, I think the greatest compliment a poet can receive is that the reader wanted to go back and read it again.
Date: 7/15/2014 11:01:00 AM
There were many tremendous poems in the contest and yours was great! Thank you for entering my contest and letting me display your work here for PoetrySoup to see.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/15/2014 12:06:00 PM
Carol, thank you for the time and effort you put into this contest, great them and from what I am reading great responses.
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