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The Fading of Candlelight

Their candles burnt brightly long ago
Providing for us and watching us grow
But the years passed by and took their toll
And left behind gaps in our soul.

When we were young they were always there
And that they'd be there forever how wrong we were
Old age comes make no mistake
Accepting it is hard to take.

They looked like giants when we were small
Picked us up when we had a fall
When we were upset they wiped our tears
And supported us throughout the years.

Their task now done, we're left behind
And it makes you think that life's unkind
Here today and gone tomorrow
All that is left is pain and sorrow.

But we remember too, those in their prime
Whose candles went out before their time
One thing I know they wouldn't want you sad
Look back and remember the good times that you had.

Times a great healer people often say
But the void that they leave does' not fade away
Their memories live on in our hearts and mind
Comfort it will bring you, that I hope you will find.

Memories do surface from time to time
When you hear a song or even this rhyme
It's dedicated to those who have gone to their rest
And the years they were with us were surely the best.



( I composed this poem for a recent family reunion dedicating it to our parents and younger members of the family who have gone to their rest.)


Written 7th November 2017

For Your Best Poem Ever Poetry Contest 

Sponsored By Chantelle Ann Cooke.
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Messina Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 3:35 AM
This A great first poem of yours, Tom. A beautiful dedication in which everyone can relate to. So glad you continued to write on...keep up the great work my friend. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:26 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit Charlie, can't believe where the time has gone since I put this one on. I've learnt so much since I joined soup . Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Baker Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 8:50 PM
A very thoughtful poem for the family reunion, Tom. I thought I'd come back to your beginning here on the "soup". I'm glad I did. This brought up those in my family that have passed on, both older than I am and most, younger. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Cunningham Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 10:04 PM
Thank you very much Bill, I'd created a slideshow of old black and white photos of loved ones no longer with us to accompany it. Hope you and Sara are keeping well. Im just back from Turkey and had my birthday over there. Had a great relaxing time. Tom
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December 20, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Yes, as my now deceased mother-in-law used to say, "There are no old ones, we are the old ones". My husband and I are facing what our parents faced years ago. I hope I can be as strong and as healthy as they were through what lies ahead. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Thank you very much Sara, I wrote this for a family reunion to honour those who have passed away. My first ever poem on here. Tom
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:09 AM
Hi Tom, I wanted to see your first poem and I must say. it is just as good and as well-written as any of yours. This heartfelt poem really hits home, my friend. Also, how are you felling...I hope all went well with your recent surgery. All the best.. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 2:15 AM
Thanks very much Charlie, my last two ops were cancelled, I'm still waiting to hear from them. Tom
Gentile Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:19 AM
Tom, I truly love this poem and relate to every wonderful word! I could not agree with you more and you've expressed it here so gracefully!!! Happy Sunday!!
Cunningham Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 8:38 AM
Thank you very much Mike, I wrote it for a family reunion back in 2017 and I got the bug for writing poetry. Hope you're keeping well and enjoying your weekend. Tom
George Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Let the memories of those gone before, continue to blaze our paths. So beautifully written ! Very glad to comment on your first poem in poetry soup.... dear Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 11:03 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, I wrote that for a family reunion back in 2017 and have just kept going. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 12:07 PM
A lovely tribute poem, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thank you Kim, I wrote it for a family reunion and it was my first poem that I put on soup. Tom
Koplin Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 1:00 PM
A very powerful and profound tribute Tom. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Thank you very much Mark, it was for a family reunion and I wanted to pay tribute to loved ones both young and old who were no longer with us. Also my first poem on soup. Tom
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August 27, 2020 at 10:09 PM
Tom, this is a very meaningful tribute to the loved ones who went before us, laid the groundwork for us and wiped our tears. It must have been a real tear jerker at the family reunion you shared it at. A wonderful first post, enjoyed it very much.
Cunningham Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 12:23 AM
Thank you very much John, it certainly was a great occasion and to accompany it I created a PowerPoint sideshow with music using old pictures, we'd planned to have another next year but things are looking doubtful with covid. Tom
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August 25, 2020 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem. In life we do have the memories that live on. Enjoy your win and day.
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Thank you very much Paula, hope you too enjoy the day. Tom
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August 24, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Wonderful tribute and first post, Tom. Congrats on your three-year anniversary with PS.
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 1:07 PM
Thank you very much Line, can't believe that it's been three years since I joined, time moves so fast especially as you get older. Hope you're well Tom
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:51 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Tom ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 4:05 AM
Thank you Anne, exciting and a bit of anticipation, would people think it wasn't up to standard etc, well I'm still here lol. Enjoy your day. Tom
One Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:45 AM
Tom, I remember this poem and have commented previously... You have been an excellent addition to this site, with your great poems and supportive comments.. Long may they continue my friend... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Thank you very much S. O., thank you for giving us the opportunity to to do that. Cant believe its been three years since I joined soup. Enjoy your week. Tom
Idudje Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Timelines, Time, Tide &@ Tomorrow's Trace God Only Knows. Heartfelt Reminiscences & Deeply written Weldon Tom
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Gideon. I wrote that as a tribute to loved ones both young and old who have gone to their rest. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Congrats on the win for your golden oldie here, Tom, and thanks for your comments to me this week.
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 9:23 PM
Thank you Andrea, you're very welcome, I'm pleased this caught the sponsors eye. My first ever on here three years ago Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:00 PM
Your words truly come from the deepest ocean of love and memories of your loved ones. I am glad I got to read this old gem of yours because of this contest. Congratulations on your win Tom :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much Aditi, we never forget them and talk of them often, Tom
Agustin Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Beata, I'm happy you liked it. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Mcgee Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Such a glowing tribute to all those we love. Well done Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Jeanne, we never forget our loved ones, they live on in our hearts. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Awesome tribute, Tom. Congrats for your well deserved win, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Thank you very much Line, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 3:16 PM
I love this poem. Congratulations for your win Tom :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, My first on soup. Hope you're well Tom
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June 12, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Hello Tom Cunningham, congratulation on your win. Tom I always enjoy reading you poetry. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Hello Tom, I am proud of you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Thank you very much Darlene, I'm happy you enjoyed it. My first ever poem on soup. Tom
Romios Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on a win in this contest, Tom. This poem is such a reflection of you, we are fortunate to have such a soulful poet like you! You give much to do many here.Thank you! A taker...you are not! Nor are you drunk on arrogance. Your fan, Panagiota. KUDOS!!
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Panagiota, it was my first ever poem on soup, I wrote it for a family reunion after my cousin requested I write a few poems for the main night. After this I caught the bug. Tom
Horsman Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Always love to read the first post of Poets i have grown to respect,,,This is wonderful Tom, Being your first here i can only regard this as a foundation for what you have followed it with,,,,
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 2:12 AM
Thank you very much Harry, my cousin asked me if I'd do some poems for the reunion that we had back in 2016, I'd never thought of myself as a poet though, I let others tell me, never been one to blow my own trumpet. Hope you're well. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 7:15 PM
Love your first poem on PS! Just saying that we hear a song reminding us of a loved one brings back memories. I couldn't comment on your recent post...well, you know...lol
Cunningham Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Oh yeah lol.This was one of my first ever poems that I'd written for a family reunion and my first on soup. The rest is history lol. Tom
One Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:41 AM
I remember this brilliant poem.. I must say one of your finest.. Thought I would have a read of your first post again..
Cunningham Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thank you S.O. It's still one of my favourites. Hope all's well. Tom
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