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The Face of An Angel

So many poemless years, Not describing your true beauty. You’re more than an Angel, Here on angelic duty. Your face echoes truth, Of divine radiance on earth. Your presence warms my soul, And gives my life its worth. You’re the one I think about, With an honest heart so true. I just want to speak from my within, And wish a happy birthday to you. As I bring you a little closer, Your angelic dust disappears. I have always wanted to whisper, Happy birthday in your ear. Today is the day of reckoning, As my lips whisper this greeting. And praise a wonderful day, While in our secret meeting. Not a meeting of lustful acts, But a meeting of a warm embrace. I have always been mesmerized, When I look upon your face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 8:33:00 AM
this is wonderful....very sensual...i loved the last stanza, the description and words you used made me feel like i was there good job
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Date: 8/4/2009 12:50:00 PM
pure delight this is really a poem from heart that can transcend every other heart. thanks Raul for giving such a joy. cheers
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Date: 7/27/2009 6:05:00 PM
beautiful
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Date: 7/16/2009 11:16:00 PM
Dear Raul, Such a beautiful Loving POEM The Golden Pen of POETRY Strikes again Superb write as only YOUR skillful Mind can Pen ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:59:00 PM
Your words are deep , meaning, and inspirational to all who read... WONDERFUL....JP....
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Date: 7/8/2009 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful write Raul, another pen to your quiver of talent>>James
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:37:00 AM
I can feel the intimacy in this write. Great job RM .................alopez
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:14:00 AM
Really beautiful... =] I'm sure your writing has her mesmerized as well.
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:50:00 PM
yes! Raul! truly an Angelic tribute! I am sending you mail....
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:49:00 PM
Such tenderness...simple loving in this sweet sweet poem! Loved this!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/6/2009 3:53:00 PM
Wow..the haiku man is dropping love lines in the soup gallery..I am blushing after reading this piece...LOL...good work Raul..you are a talented soul.
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Date: 7/6/2009 2:55:00 PM
Happy Birthday to this angel,i'm sure this angel births the best of poems,lets celebrate--beautiful and thanks for your kind comment--charma
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