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The Eyes Have It

Your eyes have signaled a defeat,
despite your words: weak trials
to set a victory scene complete
with lies, sneers, and bogus smiles --
all hope, all truth, finally fled --
a game unstoppable once started.
What‘s left is but a love now dead,
sad stories since we met and parted.
All lives contain elemental stuff --
romance, drama, and cartoons.
Let's have (we suffer through enough)
no crying clowns, no blue balloons.
But oh! the hurt within those eyes
that dam the tears your speech denies!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Good play on words. ;0)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Very nicely worded; I can see why it was featured as POTW. All the best!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Congrats Leo Larry on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share luv...
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Leo. Love, Carol
Kotsybar Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 12:51 PM
Very good! There are so few sonneteers these days, and even fewer good ones. You have a great sensitivity, as well.
Squyres Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Raw emotions !! Sooo sad and dramatic..in a good way that is. Sorry, can't say it right with my words. Very moving !!!
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