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The Eyes Don't Lie

I have seen the broken bus windows fireflies in my daughter’s afro the look in the eyes of passersby prompting her to ask; “Dad, why are they looking at us?” Which prompted my reply: “Maybe they’ve never seen an Ironworker before.” John G. Lawless ©1/17/2022

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Date: 1/25/2022 2:10:00 AM
What a MARVELOUS reply, John. Wow! What a marvelous marvelous marvelous reply, John!
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Date: 1/18/2022 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful and wonderous. Love it. God bless you friend. love, Gina
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Date: 1/18/2022 8:50:00 AM
Your poetry is so so revealing today. Beautiful and broken like in the right places, where the light can shine in. Thank you for sharing and partaking, in our writer experience :)
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Date: 1/18/2022 8:03:00 AM
Great poem John. Enjoyed Debx
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Date: 1/18/2022 4:35:00 AM
Enjoyed it John, fun read.
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