The Eyes Don'T Lie

I have seen the broken bus windows
fireflies in my daughter’s afro
the look in the eyes of passersby
prompting her to ask;
“Dad, why are they looking at us?”
Which prompted my reply:
“Maybe they’ve never seen
an Ironworker before.”

John G. Lawless
©1/17/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 2:10 AM
What a MARVELOUS reply, John. Wow! What a marvelous marvelous marvelous reply, John!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Wonderful and wonderous. Love it. God bless you friend. love, Gina
Rose  Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Your poetry is so so revealing today. Beautiful and broken like in the right places, where the light can shine in. Thank you for sharing and partaking, in our writer experience :)
M  Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Great poem John. Enjoyed Debx
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January 18, 2022 at 4:35 AM
Enjoyed it John, fun read.
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