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The Eyes 2

I like em'
friendly, devious at times.
I want a
lady, nefarious and mine.

20% Angel
80% Demon

I want the
damsel, who can slay her own dragon.
Mystical, perverse when love makin',
through her eyes I see heaven,
twenty four hours, like 7-11.

Jared Pickett
3/30/2010
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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/10/2010 10:12:00 PM Be careful what you ask for Jared. this kind of lady will end up causing you woe. Loved those last two lines! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 4/3/2010 3:48:00 PM Hey Jared, Thnx for the comment on my piece....Audrey's been asked to post this comment on my behalf...still waiting to hear about the collaboration....later, Jimmy Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/2/2010 1:50:00 PM Careful, dear heart, her pet may be the mystical dragon, and the damsel may be a real demon,friendly, devious, loving, and ever so angelic..and heaven may be an illusion... wonderful poem, enjoyed reading it..... love Constance Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 4/1/2010 9:06:00 AM Soup mail. Login to Reply

Andrew Crisci Date: 3/31/2010 11:44:00 PM It's lovely,humorous and honest! This is not a fantasy...this is real! I would like to take the opportunity to thank you for choosing my poem,Jared. All of the winning entries were amazing. Have a Happy Easter, and I hope you will sponsor another contest soon. Good luck and God bless you. Kindest Regards, Andrew. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/31/2010 12:19:00 AM You want a girl like 7/11:)..Thats quite a catastrophy..You have guts:)!This friend of mine love a challenge i see..I can picture you with wicked Cruella anytime:)or with an angel without wings,,with beautiful eyes..lovely humorous poem..Charma Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 3/30/2010 9:15:00 PM "who can slay her own dragon" nice work and line...Raul Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/30/2010 5:02:00 PM Oh be careful about those demons--Might eat you alive. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/30/2010 5:01:00 PM I want a secretary, who will work for food. Keep me straight. Yeah that wouold be good. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/30/2010 4:13:00 PM A great big THANKXXX to u for choosing Flamboyant as your 2nd place winner in Mirrored Refrain.. appreciate your talent and time to sponsor and judge this challenging contest... congrats to all the worthy winners and HM's ..luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/30/2010 4:11:00 PM Perfection u seek and luv the 20% Angel and 80% demon.. as I said before a man after my own heart Lone Wolf ... aren't we all looking for this?? nefarious and mine huh? ... sometimes its right in your own back yard Mr. J...luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/30/2010 3:21:00 PM Interesting taste and write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara Login to Reply

Colleen Bono Date: 3/30/2010 3:17:00 PM Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/30/2010 11:09:00 AM Enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today Jared. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply