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The Eyes 2

I like em' friendly, devious at times. I want a lady, nefarious and mine. 20% Angel 80% Demon I want the damsel, who can slay her own dragon. Mystical, perverse when love makin', through her eyes I see heaven, twenty four hours, like 7-11. Jared Pickett 3/30/2010 Asavvy1

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2010 10:12:00 PM

Be careful what you ask for Jared. this kind of lady will end up causing you woe. Loved those last two lines! Luv, Andrea

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/3/2010 3:48:00 PM

Hey Jared, Thnx for the comment on my piece....Audrey's been asked to post this comment on my behalf...still waiting to hear about the collaboration....later, Jimmy

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2010 1:50:00 PM

Careful, dear heart, her pet may be the mystical dragon, and the damsel may be a real demon,friendly, devious, loving, and ever so angelic..and heaven may be an illusion... wonderful poem, enjoyed reading it..... love Constance

Marty Owens

Date: 4/1/2010 9:06:00 AM

Soup mail.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/31/2010 11:44:00 PM

It's lovely,humorous and honest! This is not a fantasy...this is real! I would like to take the opportunity to thank you for choosing my poem,Jared. All of the winning entries were amazing. Have a Happy Easter, and I hope you will sponsor another contest soon. Good luck and God bless you. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/31/2010 12:19:00 AM

You want a girl like 7/11:)..Thats quite a catastrophy..You have guts:)!This friend of mine love a challenge i see..I can picture you with wicked Cruella anytime:)or with an angel without wings,,with beautiful eyes..lovely humorous poem..Charma

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/30/2010 9:15:00 PM

"who can slay her own dragon" nice work and line...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/30/2010 5:02:00 PM

Oh be careful about those demons--Might eat you alive.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/30/2010 5:01:00 PM

I want a secretary, who will work for food. Keep me straight. Yeah that wouold be good.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2010 4:13:00 PM

A great big THANKXXX to u for choosing Flamboyant as your 2nd place winner in Mirrored Refrain.. appreciate your talent and time to sponsor and judge this challenging contest... congrats to all the worthy winners and HM's ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2010 4:11:00 PM

Perfection u seek and luv the 20% Angel and 80% demon.. as I said before a man after my own heart Lone Wolf ... aren't we all looking for this?? nefarious and mine huh? ... sometimes its right in your own back yard Mr. J...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2010 3:21:00 PM

Interesting taste and write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/30/2010 3:17:00 PM

Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2010 11:09:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today Jared. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol